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Another song written as part of the 50 90 song writing challenge. Something a little different for me. Wonderful lyrics written by Liz Petty.
Comments as always are appreciated.

STOP AND SMELL THE ROSES

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A kick drum made from the RealDrums
Floyd Jane's choir claps

Lyrics:

V1
every stone tells a story
every pebble holds a poem
every cloud gives a dreamer
reason for thoughts to roam

Every color of a rainbow
And every ray of the sun
can teach us something
if we stop....
instead of run...

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so stop and smell the roses
on every journey you are on
and listen....
listen closely
listen closely

V2
every lake knows a secret
every river sings along
every star gives a lover
reason for hearts beating strong

Every petal of a flower
and every blade of grass
can teach us something
if we stop...
don't go quickly past...

C
so stop and smell the roses
on every journey you are on
and listen.....
listen closely
and listen.....
listen closely


to hear the muse's song
yes listen....




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Wow, what a pretty tune Joanne smile Your vocal delivery on this is stunning! I really liked the lyrics too - they're almost poetic, so props to Liz for that!

Thanks so much for sharing - you should be proud of this one smile


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Very pretty song Reminded me a bit of Tom Petty. Super vocal excellent lyric


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Joanne,
I very much enjoyed the production on this song. The lyrics have a poetic 60`s folk feel that you made dynamic on the chorus with those handclaps and the mandolin.
Your wonderful vocals and harmonies add the tingle we`ve come to expect!

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Another great one Joanne.
I really liked the echo the word stop in the chorus.
Good work.
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love the sound, the mix, the production,

I agree that the lyrics have a 60s feel, maybe the melody gives me

that feeling too,

enjoyed the listen!

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Very nice vocal and production.

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Deryk, Scott, Robert, Rob, kenny and Bob. Thanks so much for giving "Smell the rose" a listen. I must say that I am not too sure about it. I tried to recreate "Ophelia" by the Lumineers for a synch opportunity but I am not sure that I succeeded. They guy who does my final mixing and production said he wasnt sure about it either (didnt like the drums and I think I agree with him).

So your encouragement is appreciated.



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VERY VERY nice Joanne, another lovely one from you

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I enjoyed this one a lot Joanne. Stellar production and vocal performance. I do agree from a syncing opportunity, the drums (beat) could be improved but only from that perspective.

From all other perspectives, this is a good, strong, well written and produced piece.

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Joanne,

What a wonderful song. The melody is simple and beautiful. Your vocal is moderate and attractive. I also like the lyrics. I enjoyed my listening very much.

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Very pretty Joanne!! I think the chorus really works well. Really nicely done in every way-write, vocal, and production. Enjoyed it!! Take care. Greg

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Originally Posted By: 44kfl
love the sound, the mix, the production,

I agree that the lyrics have a 60s feel, maybe the melody gives me

that feeling too,

enjoyed the listen!

Kenny


What he said!

Enjoyed the spin.

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