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Won't Bring Her Home A tale of love lost: Leon wrote the lyrics and sang. I sang a bit and played the guitar solos. The BandRealTracks in style: 1580:Bass, Electric, Folkie16ths Sw16 085 RealTracks in style: 790:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CrossoverGrooving Sw16 075 RealTracks in style: 2547:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm GroovinFolk Sw16 085 RealTracks in style: 2543:Pedal Steel, Background ModernCrossover Sw16 090 RealTracks in song: ~688:Organ, B3, Background Pop Ev 065 RealDrums in style: NashCrossovrSw16^05-a:Snare, Closed Hat Skip Beat 1 , b:Ride Cymbal,
Won’t Bring Her HomeYesterday I was a rooster Today I’m just a feather duster Rising from my bed this morning Took all the willpower I could muster But all the willpower in the world Won’t bring back my darling girl All the messages I left upon her phone Won’t bring her home Won’t bring her home I begged for her forgiveness Said it didn’t mean a thing But she just looked right through me Slipped off her wedding ring All my tears and my excuses They won’t ever change her mind Beg her to think about the happiness we’ve known Won’t bring her home Won’t bring her home Yesterday I was a fool All the things I took for granted How did I slide so far down? From the heights that I commanded All the stupid little lies All the hurt I trivialized Blame it all upon that damn y chromosome Won’t bring her home Won’t bring her home Won’t bring her home Won’t bring her home
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Nice one!
Some very cool lines, I especially like the opening line "Yesterday I was a rooster
Today I’m just a feather duster" and the closing line "All the hurt I trivialized
Blame it all upon that damn y chromosome"
Lovely fluid and melodic guitar playing, just the way I like to hear it.
Good tune you two, enjoyed!
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Leon & Peter...
Cool song. Rhyming chromosome/home was original!
Very cool instrumentation. Excellent mix. Good vocal.
SUPER nice guitar! Sounded like George Harrison was in the studio!!! Terrific.
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Great vibe, and some really creative lyrics!! Love that Harrison/Clapton vibe on the solos-SOOOOOOOOO-SWEEEEEEEET!! Very cool stuff guys!! Take care. Greg
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A slightly restrained blues and very tasteful.
Nice laid back vocal and cool guitar.
Cheers.
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Clever write Peter. I really liked the chord progression and the drum groove.
And of course the guitar work was excellent.
Great write my friend. Rob
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Nice one!
Some very cool lines, I especially like the opening line "Yesterday I was a rooster
Today I’m just a feather duster" and the closing line "All the hurt I trivialized
Blame it all upon that damn y chromosome"
Lovely fluid and melodic guitar playing, just the way I like to hear it.
Good tune you two, enjoyed! Thanks Dave - glad you liked the guitar parts. Peter
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Nice one!
Some very cool lines, I especially like the opening line "Yesterday I was a rooster
Today I’m just a feather duster" and the closing line "All the hurt I trivialized
Blame it all upon that damn y chromosome"
Lovely fluid and melodic guitar playing, just the way I like to hear it.
Good tune you two, enjoyed! I couldn't agree more. A really good write, arrangement and delivery. It has it all. Cool song and great job by both of you. Merry Christmas, Alan
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Awesome tune. Excellent vocal and lyric. And the harmonies Well done. Love the sound of your guitar Peter. Super tone and loved your phrasing..
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Peter & Leon,
Who could resist that opening line? - brilliant!
I liked the "won`t bring her home" refrain ( catchy in a foreboding way) and I always enjoy Leon`s vocal style.
Then there`s the guitar playing; up there with your best, Peter!
Robert
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Leon & Peter...
Cool song. Rhyming chromosome/home was original!
Very cool instrumentation. Excellent mix. Good vocal.
SUPER nice guitar! Sounded like George Harrison was in the studio!!! Terrific.
floyd Thanks floyd I'm very happy to take the George Harrison compliment! Peter
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Really enjoyed this Peter & Leon. You delivered something from inside the box but outside the square  . Cool guitar lines, a bit of Santana might have snuck in there even, and all wrapped up with a top drivin' beat. Great effort.
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Really cool song! You've got some sweet licks riding through this one!
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Good work on this one guys. Powerful song. Good job on everything. Punchy mix!
Smokin' guitar.
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Great vibe, and some really creative lyrics!! Love that Harrison/Clapton vibe on the solos-SOOOOOOOOO-SWEEEEEEEET!! Very cool stuff guys!! Take care. Greg Greg Thanks - made my day. Peter
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Dear "PeterF" and Leon... The downwardly spiraling sense of despair over the loss of someone's love is vividly dramatized in your song, "Won't Bring Her Home". The music implacably drives home the finality of the situation. Leon, your vocal performance would convince a doctor that you were in a state of shock over "her" departure. "PeterF", your guitar solos were like licks of flame rising out of the pit of the private hell of a man who is so desperately, agonizingly sorry for his mis-steps on the path to happiness that he can't believe he did it to himself: "Yesterday I was a fool
All the things I took for granted
How did I slide so far down?
From the heights that I commanded"Oh, yes. The guilt is as thick as steam. Sleepness nights and fatigued-blurred days are definitely in this poor man's future. I think it would be a good idea for someone to empty out his medicine cabinet and put a trigger guard on his pistol...don't you?  Sorrowfully  , LOREN
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Hello, Peter
Very nice bluesy rock!
Super lead guitar!
As floyd said, sounded like George Harrison was in the studio!!!
The minor cliché chord progression on bass is also very effective.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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A slightly restrained blues and very tasteful.
Nice laid back vocal and cool guitar.
Cheers. Thanks Rich much appreciated.
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A stratosferic song!! everything is perfect: vocal, sound, mixing and solo guitar tone.
Congratulations.
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Clever write Peter. I really liked the chord progression and the drum groove.
And of course the guitar work was excellent.
Great write my friend. Rob Thanks for the review Rob much appreciated. Peter
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