|
Log in to post
|
Print Thread |
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345
Veteran
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345 |
First song in a while ... been so busy and also (because of that) bereft of inspiration for a long time. But ... let's see how this one goes? Thanks so much for listening - all feedback, it goes without saying, is very welcome. My browser is giving me grief, so I'm going to post the link "as is". Sorry, but here goes: https://audiomack.com/song/jamesdelsono/tell-her-i-love-herStyle is _PJONPB2.STY (Country Piano Ballad w/ Pedal St) [there's no Pedal Steel in this one, though, I muted it!] RealTracks in style: ~701:Bass, Electric, PopHalfNotesSync Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 1728:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm PopBalladJohn Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~362:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085 RealTracks in style: ~363:Pedal Steel, Background Ev 085RealDrums [in style:NashvilleEven8^2-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat TELL HER I LOVE HER The night is dark, and I am far from home I may not make it back all on my own, So, if you hear this, please kindly pass it on To the one person for whom I write this song. Tell her I love her; please tell her not to cry If it should happen I'm not back tonight Tell her I'm glad that I could call her mine From when we met, right to the present time. *** This cruel world may have the best of me; I thought it slight; it's strong, in fact, you see. But here I am, ready at last to call Time on this fierce-fought battle for my soul. Tell her I love her; please tell her not to cry If it should happen I'm not back tonight Tell her I'm glad that I could call her mine From when we met, right to the present time. Tell her I love her; please tell her not to cry If it should happen that tonight I die; But, if I live, ask her to be my wife And I will love her for the rest of my life.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 3,414
PG Music Staff
|
|
PG Music Staff
Joined: Feb 2017
Posts: 3,414 |
Nice work on this one James  I like how gentle and calming it is to listen to. It has a lot of sincerity behind it, and I enjoyed the instrumentation a lot. It works great with your vocals. Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Deryk
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 15,150
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 15,150 |
Like Deryk said there is a lot of sincerity in this.
The choice of style is perfect for the spoken word and the lyrc.
Well done!
J&B
Our albums and singles are on Spotify, Apple Music, Amazon Music, YouTube Music, Pandora and more. If interested search on Janice Merritt. Thanks! Our Videos are here on our website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2017
Posts: 2,948
PG Music Staff
|
|
PG Music Staff
Joined: Jun 2017
Posts: 2,948 |
This song has such a longing and sadness to it, but I really enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Ember
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345 |
Thanks everyone. It, as I said above, was my first song in a while - so I was kinda worried about "letting it go", as it were. So I'm so happy that you enjoyed it - thank you.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Aug 2017
Posts: 226
Apprentice
|
|
Apprentice
Joined: Aug 2017
Posts: 226 |
Spoken style vocal works well for this song. Enjoyed the listen.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Apr 2018
Posts: 1,998
Expert
|
|
Expert
Joined: Apr 2018
Posts: 1,998 |
Musician17,
It’s a nice instrumental track on this, musically very smooth . . and the spoken word works well with it (though I think you’d want to have the vocal sit back a little bit). Worth putting in the time to refine this further.
Kindest regards,
Deej
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345 |
Agreed about the vocal needing to sit back. I think I'll use a different mic from now on, etc., in any case - so hopefully that will be a helping factor, too. Thanks for taking the time to listen, Deej.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Jun 2000
Posts: 1,944
Expert
|
|
Expert
Joined: Jun 2000
Posts: 1,944 |
Pleasant & interesting chordal changes over the recitation...
Nicely done...
I enjoyed listening.
Jim
†=☮&♥
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Sep 2010
Posts: 7,406
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Sep 2010
Posts: 7,406 |
Ah, a classic tearjerker. Spoken word with music isn't really my cup of tea, but it worked fine. Glad to hear another of your songs!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345 |
Thanks Jim and David ... made me smile :-) Appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment! :-)
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,656
Veteran
|
|
Veteran
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,656 |
Hi James,
I'm not quite sure what to say. Your song has finished playing and I'm sitting here with a bit of a tear my eye. Your presentation is quite a journey. You transported me to a battlefield and the lull between confrontations. As I was listening to you speak, in my mind, I could see a soldier, tired and totally worn out. He was writing a letter to the one he loves most on earth.
Your lyrics captured this moment really well for me.
The only other song that has done this to me is Galveston (written by Jimmy Webb and made famous by Glenn Campbell). This is also about separation due to war and the uncertainty this brings.
A fine effort!
All the best,
Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
User Showcase
|
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345
Veteran
|
|
OP
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,345 |
Oh my word, Noel. I don't think I've ever gotten such a reaction to any of my songs! Thank you. You know, that was exactly the imagery I was going for - an exhausted soldier, writing to his best friend about the one he loves most. I'm so, so happy this came through as intended, and even happier at receiving such a beautiful, genuine reaction.
I haven't had a chance yet to listen to Galveston, but I will do so without a shadow of a doubt :-) Thanks so much once more!!!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.
ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Band-in-a-Box 2025 French Version is Here!
Bonjour à tous,
Band-in-a-Box® 2025 pour Windows est disponible en Français.
Le téléchargement se fait à partir du site PG Music
Pour ceux qui auraient déjà acheté la version 2025 de Band-in-a-Box (et qui donc ont une version anglaise), il est possible de "franciser" cette version avec les patchs suivants:
BIAB 2025 - francisation
RealBand 2025 - francisation
Voilà, enjoy!
Band-in-a-Box 2025 German Version is Here!
Update Your Band-in-a-Box® 2025 to Build 1128 for Windows Today!
Already using Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 1128 now from our Support Page to enjoy the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.
Stay up to date—get the latest update now!
Update to RealBand® 2025 Build 5 Windows Today!
Already using RealBand® 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 5 now from our Support Page to ensure you have the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.
Get the latest update today!
PowerTracks Pro Audio 2025 for Windows is Here!
PowerTracks Pro Audio 2025 is here! This new version introduces many features, including VST3 support, the ability to load or import a .FLAC file, a reset option for track height in the Tracks window, a taller Timeline on the Notation window toolbar, new freeze buttons in the Tracks window, three toolbar modes (two rows, single row, and none), the improved Select Patch dialog with text-based search and numeric patch display, a new button in the DirectX/VST window to copy an effects group, and more!
First-time packages start at only $49. Already a PowerTracks Pro Audio user? Upgrade for as little as $29!
www.pgmusic.com/powertracks.htm
Video: Summary of the New Band-in-a-Box® App for iOS®
Join Tobin as he takes you on a tour of the new Band-in-a-Box® app for iOS®! Designed for musicians, singer-songwriters, and educators, this powerful tool lets you create, play, and transfer songs effortlessly on your iPhone® or iPad®—anytime, anywhere.
Band-in-a-Box® for iOS® :Summary video.
Check out the forum post for more information.
Introducing the New Band-in-a-Box iOS App!
We’re excited to introduce the new Band-in-a-Box iOS app, designed to enhance your music creation. The Band-in-a-Box iOS app is the perfect companion to your desktop version, giving you the freedom to sketch out ideas wherever you are and develop them further when you're back at your workstation. Now, you can create, play, generate, and transfer songs seamlessly between your iOS device, and desktop.
Key Features:
- Easily Create and Play Songs – Build and play songs effortlessly on your device.
- MIDI and RealTracks/RealStyles Support – Generate MIDI tracks and RealTracks/RealStyles right on your iPhone or iPad (RealTracks/RealStyles require an internet connection).
- Notation Support – View chord sheets, professional notation, tab, and drum notation for all tracks.
...and more!
Watch the Band-in-a-Box iOS Overview Video.
Visit the Band-in-a-Box for iOS support page for more information and to listen to demos of our RealStyles catalogue.
Download the Band-in-a-Box iOS App from the Apple App Store today!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Forums58
Topics83,814
Posts770,777
Members39,444
| |
Most Online25,754
Jan 24th, 2025
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Dansk
Deutsch - Windows
Español
Français - Windows
Italiano - Windows
Nederlands
Polski
Português
Svenskt
русский
Japanese
Simplified Chinese
Traditional Chinese
Korean