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Peter, Leon and Janice,

It's 4:00 a.m. in Melbourne right now. This really made me open my eyes.

Brilliant... Brilliant... Brilliant.

I love EVERYTHING about this write and it's presentation.

► Spectacular intro

► Such a memorable melody

► Totally engaging lyrics

► Super, super, super production

► Leon's writing and singing shines

► Peter's guitar playing is *chef's kiss*



► Janice's backing is the perfect icing for such a prize-winning cake

I congratulate you all on a wonderful listen and really fine entertainment.

All the best,
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Originally Posted By: vicarn
Hi Peter.
Effective song. I think the vocals need upping a bit as they're getting a little lost in the background guitars.

Vic


Thanks Vic - have made an adjustment to the vocal.

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Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Very different from what I'm used to hearing from you guys! I like it, great groove, lots of energy.

Nice change in mood at 3:20, and I can really hear Janice do her cool thing during that part, she seems a bit buried in the mix for the rest of the song (for my tastes).

Good vocal from Leon, and good write.

Lovely playing as per usual, Peter, nice fills and great outro solo.

Good song guys and gal, enjoyed!



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Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
SOLID sound. Good write. Peter, Leon, Janice, you have such gifted talent, and when you combine it you really create some magic. I really enjoy your playing, Peter. Wish you lived nearby and we could jam. This song is polished to a fine shine. You have the mix perfect for the style, but I would prefer to hear the vocals a bit more upfront.


Thanks Marty. A jam is only a Dropbox away!

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Thanks for the harmony mentions.

It was a pleasure to be invited in on this!

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Peter, you had me from the first measure. Everything I would have said already has been said. All I can say is WOW this is absolutely fantastic. Great vocal, harmonies, backing tracks and mix.


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I'm a sucker for nostalgic love songs. Good lyrics.

I especially like the melody and lyrics of the chorus. Sticks with you, you know.

Aces guitar work. Love that ending.

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Originally Posted By: Scott C
I loved this tune. It started out and gave me a 80 vibe then slipped into a very cool rock/pop tune. Super vocal Leon and very tasteful harmonies. Very neat hook in this song. I will be humming the melody for the rest of the day. Guitar was excellent Peter. Well done..


Thanks a lot Scott.

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Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
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Fun and unexpected tune! Sounds like a fusion of Old school pop rock and K-pop. Solid composition and performance! I liked the rest/drift at 3:25 and tensioning of Peter solo winding into the end. I do think Janice is a bit quiet on this, I would bring her vocals up...maybe in some places. Thank you for sharing.

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Never listened to K-pop.....I was actually thinking a bit of The Who when I wrote the song.

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Great storytelling tune. Great guitar throughout. I like how you "brought it down" for the next to last verse. That was a nice effect. Excellent work.


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Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
Good track. Good work to all. I love the background vocals mixed in well with the lead. Nice use of the band too. I like it. Good POP song.


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Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Great job everyone.

This sounds awesome!


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Originally Posted By: Noel96
Peter, Leon and Janice,

It's 4:00 a.m. in Melbourne right now. This really made me open my eyes.

Brilliant... Brilliant... Brilliant.

I love EVERYTHING about this write and it's presentation.

► Spectacular intro

► Such a memorable melody

► Totally engaging lyrics

► Super, super, super production

► Leon's writing and singing shines

► Peter's guitar playing is *chef's kiss*



► Janice's backing is the perfect icing for such a prize-winning cake

I congratulate you all on a wonderful listen and really fine entertainment.

All the best,
Noel


Thanks Noel you are too kind. We all really appreciate the review.

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Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
I'm a sucker for nostalgic love songs. Good lyrics.

I especially like the melody and lyrics of the chorus. Sticks with you, you know.

Aces guitar work. Love that ending.


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Peter, you had me from the first measure. Everything I would have said already has been said. All I can say is WOW this is absolutely fantastic. Great vocal, harmonies, backing tracks and mix.


Thanks Mario

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Man.... What a good song. I like to listen before I read the credits.
I was thinking this really sounds like the LA Hard Rock style.... And lo and behold, it was. That chorus reminds me of something but I can't place it. No matter, your chorus is good as is the whole song.

Good job to everyone involved. I was wondering if that was maybe your sister on bgv.... Janice.... Should have known.

Totally enjoyed it.


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The 'team' sure did a great job of delivering this.

Clever lyrics, and great backing arrangements.


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Thanks again to all who commented on my small part in this great song! And to both Peter and Leon for writing it and inviting me to sing on it.

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Sweetly heavy backing. All those rhythm instruments played so well together, and the vocals joined in convincingly. Nice cool-down and ramp back up. Peter's guitars gave that extra voice to the band. Much enjoyed this.


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Hi PeterF,

Nice composition. Personally, I find the lead guitar too far back (except in the last part) because it is rich in variations. The voices are impeccable. The whole is pleasant. Great collaborative work.

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Nice write!

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