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Hi all. I wrote this a while back, this is the 2022 remix.
All comments welcome. Regards Rob4580

I'm a weeping child


(e) I'm a weeping child when things go wrong.(he's a weeping)
I wrote it down for the words in this song. (hes a weeping)
(a)No concentration since you've been gone. (he's a weeping)
Can't seem to tell what's right or wrong

(e)I'm a weeping (b)child I have no (a)smile I'm a weeping (e)child

Can't seem to sleep when the rain comes down. (he's a weeping)
Can't close my eyes hear every sound. (he's a weeping)
I hear a noise round my back door. (he's a weeping)
Can't seem to find what I'm looking for.

(e)I cannot sleep (b)out on my feet (a)I a weeping (e)child

Chorus
(c#m)Im so alone get chills at night.
(e) Can't get no peace there's no respite.
(c#m)Won't you come back and make it right
cause (e)I'm your (b)weeping (e)child

Bridge

Chorus
(c#m)I'm so alone get chills at night.
(e) Can't get no peace there's no respite.
(c#m)Won't you come back and make it right
cause (e)I'm your (b)weeping (e)child


I hope one day I'll get over you.
I hope one day I'll sleep the night through
Then I'll be happy not moping around
thought of you won't get me down

(e)No weeping child (b)I'll wear a smile(a)I'm a weeping (e)child


****** Song Summary *************
Title: Im A Weeping Child
File:-Im A Weeping Child-.SGU
Key=E , Tempo 115, Length (m:s)=1:15
No intro. 32 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 32. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
No Soloist track.
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _SPARROW.STY (Sparrow Country Rock with Slide)

RealTracks in style: ~579:Bass, Electric, Blues Roadhouse Ev 120
RealTracks in style: ~669:Guitar, Slide, Background EasySouthern Ev 120
RealTracks in style: 692:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming AcRockBright Ev 120 (A:sync)
RealTracks in style: 2634:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm CountryBluesRock Ev 110
RealDrums in style:RockHardEven8 w Tamb [Multi]

Mixed and mastered with Studio One all vocals myself

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Man, you got a wonderfully renewed Elvis sound there, Rob. Excellent band, and the vocal drives the song. Good mix and very enjoyable listen.


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I liked the song Rob. That slide guitar works very well, and really liked your intro!

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Good song Robert.

Very Delta Blues, kinda, but with some fresh vibes.

I like it!

smile

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I liked it, your voice is the star in this production as it is in all your songs. I'm a fan.


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Hello Babu. Thanks for your encouraging comment.
Rob4580

Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Man, you got a wonderfully renewed Elvis sound there, Rob. Excellent band, and the vocal drives the song. Good mix and very enjoyable listen.

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Thank you Brad

Originally Posted By: Brad Williams
I liked the song Rob. That slide guitar works very well, and really liked your intro!

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Hi Rob,

Good Blues song and well produced and sung.

Best Regards
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The Man from Murgon does it agin.
You're a chameleon Robert.
This is really cool...I'd have love a Scotty Moore solo but this one's fine.


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Rob...man you captured that great late 50's sound...love the vocal repeats and the entire vocal...it sounds like something written for or by Roy Orbison or Chris Isaak...I love this style of music and you captured it perfectly...very cool!


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[Seems to be 'Sparrow' time this year grin]

Your mini-refrain between the verses and at the end
are a pretty good Iggy Pop 'Real Wild Child' copy laugh

But you did it in a great way, I like it a lot. And the vocal repetitions are really cool.
I like it so much that I had to listen to it twice....good job!


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Rob this is fanastic!

I got a Buddy Holly vibe on this one.

Excellent vocal, backing band, and mix.

Your best to date IMHO.


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Your lead vocal has that rich, husky sound and then your background vocals are spot on. The 50’s rock and roll vibe is so enjoyable and your band kept us rockin’ along.

Fine job on the mix too. And a cool write.

Enjoyed it!

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I agree with the Roy Orbison sound, it reminds me of bands that I used to play in, great song.!!

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Thank you David

Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Good song Robert.

Very Delta Blues, kinda, but with some fresh vibes.

I like it!

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Thank you TM.

Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
I liked it, your voice is the star in this production as it is in all your songs. I'm a fan.

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Cool groove to the song Robert. Well done


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Hello Nigel. Thank you.

Originally Posted By: NigelSpiers
Hi Rob,

Good Blues song and well produced and sung.

Best Regards
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