Previous Thread
Index
Next Thread
Print Thread
Go To
#222668 11/26/13 05:59 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Expert
OP Offline
Expert
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Dear Forum Friends,
Greetings! I just posted a new song for you called "Eternal Lite." It's my first attempt at Contemporary Christian music so I ask the masters of this genre for indulgence. My brother owns a small business making flameless electric prayer candles and he ask me to write a song he could use on his website.
http://eternal-lite-candles.com/. I tried to write a song that evokes the spirit and emotion without being overtly commercial.
Here the link. I'll post the realtrack list and technical in a few days. I hope you enjoy! Thanks for listening!!

http://www.soundclick.com/player/bandradio_player.cfm?bandid=1236338&q=hi

http://www.soundclick.com/dcspacedog

SD

Last edited by SpaceDog; 11/26/13 06:00 AM.
User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2009
Posts: 9,942
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2009
Posts: 9,942
Nice job on the song... as a song done in BB/RB....

however....

This is not contemporary Christian at all. The genre is closer to folk or old style country. You don't hear anything like this on CC radio these days.

If you are planning to use this commercially on a website, take the time to fix the vocal track. It's pitchy in several places and that really needs to be fixed for commercial use.

I'm not trying to be disparaging with my remarks, just assessing the song for what it is and what you said you are planning to use it for. It needs to be professional sounding if it's to be used on a website.

I like the song. However, it needs a bit of work. The genre is what it is....and will probably be OK for the intended purposes.

Hope this helps...

Last edited by Guitarhacker; 11/26/13 06:34 AM.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2012
Posts: 2,888
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Jun 2012
Posts: 2,888
Hi SD,

nice song.
I'm with Herb: Polish the vocals.

Guenter

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 7,566
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 7,566
SD,

Nice job on this - a few adjustments as suggested and you're ready to go. smile

Bob

User Showcase
Joined: Mar 2013
Posts: 4,487
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Mar 2013
Posts: 4,487
Hi, SD !:))

I enjoyed your song very much !:))

Cheers
Dani

User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Expert
OP Offline
Expert
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
All,
Thanks for the comments. Glad you liked it. I'll look into pitch correction. I do my mixing in RB.
SD

User Showcase
Joined: Mar 2004
Posts: 6,705
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Mar 2004
Posts: 6,705
SD,

It's all been said, I also enjoyed the listen.

Later,

User Showcase
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,219
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,219
SD, Nice job on the lyrics. As was already said a little pitch correction and you're on your way. I enjoyed the message and the melody. Thanks for posting. Tom

User Showcase
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Hi SD,

I liked it smile

One thing that always stands out in your songs is your gift for melody and your ability to choose excellent chords and chord progressions to underscore it. This one is no exception.

Also, to my ears, I have to say that your arrangement and subsequent production of 'Eternal Life' has a really well thought through emotional development. It's easy to hear that a great deal of thought has gone into getting this into place.

It's thumbs up from me.

All the best,
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2024
User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Expert
OP Offline
Expert
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Danny, Tommy, Noel,
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Noel, I appreciate your comments about my chord changes and melodies. I'm often not satisfied with either the chords or the melody so they usually get extra attention. I'm glad it's paying off.
SD

User Showcase
Joined: May 2008
Posts: 5,083
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2008
Posts: 5,083
I also think you are very thoughtful and talented songwriter with a nice voice and now that you are getting more into RT's and mixing the sky's the limit.

Let me know how that GSnap worked out for you.

Good luck with the project SD.

User Showcase
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
SpaceDog,

For what it's worth, I have numerous tuners (Melodyne, Nectar, GSnap) but I keep on returning to ReaTune in the DAW Reaper. It's quick, easy and effective. The image below shows a section of my vocals with tuning applied.



ReaTune was one of the main reasons that I started using Reaper. After a while, though, I found it was an incredibly powerful DAW and so stayed with it. Up until then, I was a Sonar user.

If you want to try ReaTune, Reaper can be used freely. Once you pass the expiry trial date, a reminder pops up but the program remains fully functional. (When it became clear to me that I was going to use Reaper as my DAW of choice, I bought it out of respect for the company.)

Just a thought.


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2024
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,822
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2011
Posts: 7,822
Enjoyed the tune. Lyrics were excellent


Scott Collingwood
https://soundcloud.com/scottt709
https://soundcloud.com/spiritlevel-ca
https://www.youtube.com/@SpiritLevel-ge3hm/
User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Expert
OP Offline
Expert
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Josie,
Thanks for yor knid words. Well, the help from John (Silvertones) I was able to access the GSnap VST plugin an I've been experimenting with it in both RB and Cubase. The download process was a friggin nigtmare!!!! It literally took four hours and I got several unwanted freeware programs.

Scott C,
Glad you liked it

Noel,
Does ReaTune work with RB, Cubase,as plugin or is it a stand-alone program. I'm willing to try it if you would send the download link. Thanks.

All,
By the way, my brother's company was really thrilled with the song. Once I send them remix, they plan to do a video have it play in their dispay booth at tradeshows.

Thanks

SD

User Showcase
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Hi SD,

ReaTune is not a plugin in the usual sense. It only works inside Reaper. If you're interested in having a look at Reaper, it's at

http://reaper.fm/

A number of people on the forum use Reaper as their DAW. There are also lots of Reaper Tutorials on Youtube.

Regards,
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2024
User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Expert
OP Offline
Expert
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
FYI, here are the RTs and technical for the song.
Style is _PBALADM.STY (Med PopBal w Dreamy ElGt (85 RS))

RealTracks in style: ~518:Bass, Electric, Pop HalfNotes Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~362:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~542:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm Dreamy Ev 085
RealDrums in Style: NashvilleEven8^5-HiHat,Ride

User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Expert
OP Offline
Expert
Joined: Apr 2011
Posts: 1,040
Noel,
Thanks. I don't think I'm up to learning a new DAW at this point. I'll keep it in mind though. Thanks.
SD

User Showcase
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Oct 2008
Posts: 19,556
Hi SD,

You can always do what I did for the first 6 months, and that was ...

1. Render the song's backing to a WAV file.

2. Solo the vocal and render it to a second WAV file.

3. Now load those two files into Reaper.

4. Adjust the volumes so they're reasonable balanced.

5. Add the ReaTune plug-in to the Vocal track.

6. Tune the Vocal.

7. Solo the Vocal track and render to a new Vocal track.

8. Load the tuned vocal back into your DAW of preference.

All you need to know to do the above is

(a) how to open audio file (drag and drop works fine)
(b) how to adjust volume sliders
(c) how to add ReaTune to a track and use it
(d) how to render files

As I said, that's what I used to do for around 6 months. Also, if you want a hand to understand something, I don't mind helping out.

All the best with whatever you decide!
Noel


MY SONGS...
Audiophile BIAB 2024
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Go To

Link Copied to Clipboard
ChatPG

Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.

ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.

PG Music News
Update your Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows® Today!

If you’ve already purchased Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®, great news—a new update is now available! This update introduces a handy new feature: a vertical cursor in the Tracks window that shows the current location across all tracks, and more.

Discover everything included in this free update and download it now at https://www.pgmusic.com/support_windowsupdates.htm#1124

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Boot Camp: The AI Lyrics Generator

With Band-in-a-Box 2025® for Windows®, we've introduced an exciting new feature: the AI Lyrics Generator! In this video, Tobin guides you step-by-step on how to make the most of this new tool.

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Boot Camp: The AI Lyrics Generator video.

Check out the forum post for more information.

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Using VST3 Plugins

Band-in-a-Box 2025® for Windows® now includes support for VST3 plugins, bringing even more creative possibilities to your music production. Join Simon as he guides you through the process in this easy-to-follow demonstration!

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Using VST3 Plugins

Join the conversation on our forum.

Video: Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows: Using The BB Stem Splitter!

In this video, Tobin provides a crash course on using the new BB Stem Splitter feature included in Band-in-a-Box 2025® for Windows®. During this process he also uses the Audio Chord Wizard (ACW) and the new Equalize Tempo feature.

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Using the BB Stem Splitter

Check out the forum post for some optional Tips & Tricks!

Congrats to Misha (Rustyspoon)…downloaded/installed a full Audiophile 2025!

Breaking News!

We’re thrilled to announce that Rustyspoon has made PG history as the very first person to successfully complete the download and install of the full Band-in-a-Box 2025 Windows Audiophile Edition (with FLAC files)—a whopping 610GB of data!

A big shoutout to Rustyspoon for stepping up to be our test "elf!"

Thank you for your support, Rustyspoon!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows Videos

With the launch of Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows, we're adding new videos to our YouTube channel. We'll also share them here once they are published so you can easily find all the Band-in-a-Box® 2025 and new Add-on videos in one place!

Whether it's a summary of the new features, demonstrations of the 202 new RealTracks, new XPro Styles PAK 8, or Xtra Styles PAKs 18, information on the 2025 49-PAK, or detailed tutorials for other Band-in-a-Box® 2025 features, we have you covered!

Reference this forum post for One-Stop Shopping of our Band-in-a-Box® 2025 Videos - we will be updating this post as more videos are added!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows is Here!

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows is here, packed with major new features and an incredible collection of available new content! This includes 202 RealTracks (in Sets 449-467), plus 20 bonus Unreleased RealTracks in the 2025 49-PAK. There are new RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, “Songs with Vocals” Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 4, two new sets of “RealDrums Stems,” XPro Styles PAK 8, Xtra Styles PAK 19, and more!

Special Offers
Upgrade to Band-in-a-Box® 2025 with savings of up to 50% on most upgrade packages during our special—available until December 31, 2024! Visit our Band-in-a-Box® packages page for all the purchase options available.

2025 Free Bonus PAK & 49-PAK Add-ons
We've packed our Free Bonus PAK & 49-PAK
with some incredible Add-ons! The Free Bonus PAK is automatically included with most Band-in-a-Box® for Windows 2025 packages, but for even more Add-ons (including 20 Unreleased RealTracks!) upgrade to the 2025 49-PAK for only $49. You can see the full lists of items in each package, and listen to demos here.

If you have any questions, feel free to connect with us directly—we’re here to help!

Forum Statistics
Forums65
Topics84,021
Posts764,596
Members39,261
Most Online25,754
Jan 24th, 2025
Newest Members
DanielVeres, Tyler Schon, Rotund, JohnDoo, Todd Taylor
39,262 Registered Users
Top Posters(30 Days)
MarioD 176
musocity 150
jpettit 138
Jim Fogle 114
rsdean 107
Noel96 105
Today's Birthdays
There are no members with birthdays on this day.
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5