There does seem to be a build up of "mid mud" in the mix taht could be cleared to make things ring through cleaner. Cool song and nice BBoys feel as well. Personally I'd be inclined to stop short before the vocal vibrato - but that's a matter of personal taste. There're a couple of grammatical/syntax errors in the lyrics that you might consider addressing since they are printed.
Very nice job all together.


Cheers
rayc
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