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#353417 06/10/16 11:58 AM
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Here's a new one, "She Says."

https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs/she-says

Have a great weekend everybody. Some great songs on here this week.

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Title: She Says
Key=C , Tempo 100, Length (m:s)=3:52
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The melody lift on the hook "She Says" is great, makes it memorable and pretty and catchy. I wish I had a better way of expressing myself about it. Love the rhythmic feel, another very cool song,

Kenny

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Great stuff David!! I really like this. The chorus melody is really catchy. I really like "the band" you chose. Lyrics are interesting and insightful if somewhat abstract. You're doing some great stuff! Take care. Greg

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what a pretty song, dang it, dude, I was smiling listening to this. I really like the feeling of floating through the clouds while listening.

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Hi David,

nice song! I especially like the strings.
Enjoyable listen.

Guenter

David Snyder #353502 06/11/16 08:53 AM
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Hello David

this one is your best for me.
Very melodic and rock at the same time.

Very well done
Sergio



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David,

Another good one. The verses are very stream-of-consciousness and the chorus nice structured-catchy - cool combination. The verses reminded me of Loudon Wainwright III - not sure why... (I was a big LWIII fan).

Very cool combo of instruments. Nice mix. The vocal is at a good level - I thought it would sound nice to add a pretty good delay to it and a touch more reverb (for this style).

Nice!

fj

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Enjoyed this one a lot.

Unlike me, you write songs that tend to work well with your vocal style. I rarely sound adequate.

Like me, I think this is the second song you've posted that has the same title to a song i've used.....


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Hi David,

That was ‘talented’ my friend I think lots of folks underestimated your ‘gift. I love that way of doing a song, the beat at twice the vocal time frame of lyrical phrasing, and as always with you, thought provoking. Work at this song, perhaps condense the time, you have a winner.


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I really like the way you sing your lyrics and how it flows in your song. I had to play it a few times, just because I like your song. Inspirational. Looking forward to hearing more from you.

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David,
the hook and the words around it are really cool.


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David, Kind of Dylanesque. I enjoyed my listen. You sure are prolific these days. Tom

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David,

Another awesome song! I could absolutely hear this one in Midnight Cowboy - I don't know why, but it just feels like it would fit right in - absolutely loved it!

Bob

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Hi Everyone,

Thanks to each and everyone of you for your wonderful comments. My wife Gayle and I are celebrating our anniversary today so if I stay at the computer more than 10 minutes I will be in the dog house.

I will get back to each and everyone tomorrow and also catch up on my listening.

Thanks everybody! Some great stuff going on in the forum this week!!!

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Originally Posted By: 44kfl
The melody lift on the hook "She Says" is great, makes it memorable and pretty and catchy. I wish I had a better way of expressing myself about it. Love the rhythmic feel, another very cool song,

Kenny


I agree with the quote above, and I also like the strings.

The lyrics are interesting, and you really ought to post them to help people get the full effect of the song

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You had me right from the start on this one!

You have that knack of putting poetry to music and I like it. Your vocal was super and were your backing track but the lyrics took it over the top for me.

Great song.


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Thanks Kenny!!

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Thanks Greg!!

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Mattox, that makes my year. Exactly the effect I was looking for!!

Thank you!!!

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Thanks Guenter!!

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