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Alyn, You are certainly an original! Your chord choices always surprise me and they are fantastic. You seem to go places that I never would think of. The melody here is very strong as well as the lyrics. Nice production -the full band coming in was inspired. This is simply outstanding. Tom
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Hi Alyn. Nice to have you back on the forum. How is life in Whales? I hope you have had a great summer. Loved this one. Great write!
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Alyn,
This just oozes with pain and gut-wrenching in-your-face honesty.
I love the simplicity of it. Great job man.
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I just love the straight forwardness of this and then the production at the end is perfect. A very cool song.
Kenny
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Alyn,
Another unique and strong submission from you. I always look forward to hearing what you will do next. I really enjoyed this. Like orchestration at the end.
Steve
Steve Young Music"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of." - Robert Schumann
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Hi Alyn
Loved your lyric and vocal. Guitar was very nice as well
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great song, alyn!
the lyrics nail the heart acing, troubled love and…
…when will the video be available?
you are singing as you mean every word of it
just loved the marching drum at the end
einar
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Excellent track. Beautiful chord progression and melody you created.
I would see this song as a soundtrack in a movie.
Sergio
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"this is the last time I tell you I love you
this is the last time I tell you I care"
Wow, do those lines ever establish the theme.
The juxtaposition of your vocals and the RTs is brilliant!
Welcome back with a great song!
J&B
Thanks both I look at the words now and go wow, did I write them as they just flowed out of my head. The hard part was getting the backing to fit the sorrow glad you enjoyed Alyn
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Alyn,
This sounds very theatrical. Should be in a big musical!
"...this is goodbye goodbye..."
I can see the curtains slowly closing as the spotlight fades........
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Bob Yeh I see this on stage now, thanks to you! thanks for listening and commenting take care Alyn
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Definitely a full Gibson!
It has enough tightness, and drama to last for a while ;-)
indeed good to have you back posting those truly original songs!
Rob Rob, thank you so much, for saying that. I really appreciate the comments coming from the RnAM stable of excellence.  all the best Alyn
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Alyn, You are certainly an original! Your chord choices always surprise me and they are fantastic. You seem to go places that I never would think of. The melody here is very strong as well as the lyrics. Nice production -the full band coming in was inspired. This is simply outstanding. Tom Tom, As David Snyder I studied the book of transcribed Beatles' scores so I thank that book for the changes! And the hours in the library at college studying music theory....sorry Dental Surgery  So glad you enjoyed it Alyn
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Hi Alyn. Nice to have you back on the forum. How is life in Whales? I hope you have had a great summer. Loved this one. Great write! Wales is corrupt and evil, that is of course just because of my experiences  BUT words flow thanks to that!! Thanks for listening and commenting good to hear you are back as well All the best Alyn
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Alyn,
This just oozes with pain and gut-wrenching in-your-face honesty.
I love the simplicity of it. Great job man. Thanks David, coming from you is praise indeed Alyn
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I just love the straight forwardness of this and then the production at the end is perfect. A very cool song.
Kenny Cheers Kenny, nothing should distract from the message. Finding, and trying, the tango drums ended the song perfectly Thanks for listening Alyn
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Alyn,
Another unique and strong submission from you. I always look forward to hearing what you will do next. I really enjoyed this. Like orchestration at the end.
Steve
It's good to hear you're back as I look forward to your special style of songs So glad you enjoyed this All the best Alyn
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Hi Alyn
Loved your lyric and vocal. Guitar was very nice as well
Hi Scott, thanks for stopping by and listening Alyn
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great song, alyn!
the lyrics nail the heart acing, troubled love and…
…when will the video be available?
you are singing as you mean every word of it
just loved the marching drum at the end
einar einar, thanks for listening, I do not think the video will appear if the current discussions is anything to go by  I thought of my divorce and so meant every word I sang, but quite a few years later thanks for listening Alyn
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Excellent track. Beautiful chord progression and melody you created.
I would see this song as a soundtrack in a movie.
Sergio
Hi Sergio, I would see this song as a soundtrack in a movie. if that ever happens, that would be great!! take care Alyn
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