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Robertkc #377955 11/28/16 09:46 PM
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Robert

Nice song and a strong arrangement.

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Robert,

Nice work. Excellent choice of the style as well as real tracks. "Dust in the wind" is one of my most favorite songs by Sarah Brightman. What attracted me the most was its accompaniment by two guitar fingerpickings. Your song reminded me of it.

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Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Robert,

I REALLY like this. It has some very strong Paul Simon elements, and I say that as a huge compliment.


Yes...and that is a huge compliment.

The stripped down band is perfect for the arrangement and allows
the fine vocal to carry the lyric very well. I'm fond of saying that
perfection is not when more is added but rather when there is
nothing left to take away.

Well done!

J&B


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Originally Posted By: Marty Sorensen
A moving song, a boy's thoughts as he goes about his chores on the prairie. I spent a year in Canada and the prairie loomed large in peoples' imagination. I liked the way "over the sea" ended in a melodic turn down.

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Thanks for that, Marty- I`m glad the prairie meets imaginative boy theme came through.

Robert

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Originally Posted By: PeterF
Robert

Nice song and a strong arrangement.

Peter


Thank you ,Peter!

Robert

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Originally Posted By: HiroshiK
Robert,

Nice work. Excellent choice of the style as well as real tracks. "Dust in the wind" is one of my most favorite songs by Sarah Brightman. What attracted me the most was its accompaniment by two guitar fingerpickings. Your song reminded me of it.

Hiroshi


Hiroshi,

Thank you for your listen and comments.
The twinned guitars opening that Sarah Brightman song are cool - I`d not heard it before.

Robert

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Originally Posted By: David Snyder
Robert,

I REALLY like this. It has some very strong Paul Simon elements, and I say that as a huge compliment.


Yes...and that is a huge compliment.

The stripped down band is perfect for the arrangement and allows
the fine vocal to carry the lyric very well. I'm fond of saying that
perfection is not when more is added but rather when there is
nothing left to take away.

Well done!

J&B


Janice & Bud,

Thanks for stopping by. Its great to know a simple arrangement was all the song needed...I like your sayings!

Robert

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The style you chose for this song fits really well (perfectly!) with your lyrics... I thoroughly enjoyed it!

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Robert,
I like this folk song. Interesting storytelling and imagery.
Your voice is so easy on the ears and the harmonica was a nice touch.

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Originally Posted By: Callie - PG Music
The style you chose for this song fits really well (perfectly!) with your lyrics... I thoroughly enjoyed it!

This is today's Hot Forum Topic!


Glad you enjoyed the song, Callie...and thank you for highlighting on the forum!

Robert

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Originally Posted By: Sundance
Robert,
I like this folk song. Interesting storytelling and imagery.
Your voice is so easy on the ears and the harmonica was a nice touch.


Sundance,
I appreciate your listen and kind comments.

Robert

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Robert,

Another strong song demonstrating your songwriting skills.
Superb lyrics and I can also see some of the magical influences of Paul Simon and Donovan in amongst it all.
Loved the harmonica - it fitted like a glove.

Excellent work,
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Thanks Jez!
I`m really glad you liked the lyrics and found a bit of magic in there.

Robert

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Hello, Robert

As Jez said, I also feel some of the magical influences of Paul Simon and Donovan in amongst it all.
Very good melody and very gentle vocal!
It is so nice the chord progressions of A part which start with Dominant (G7) instead of Tonic (C) and go to Dominant of A minor (E7) - Am - F.
And Harmonica is very pleasant.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi

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Robert,

I was mesmerised by the backing that you've assembled and arranged for this creation. I thought it was ideal. Lots of imaginative lyrics, metaphors and imagery! I found myself wondering what the book must have been like to read.

Thanks for posting. It's always enjoyable to hear where your songwriter's pen takes us.

All the best,
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Originally Posted By: animarorecords
Hello, Robert

As Jez said, I also feel some of the magical influences of Paul Simon and Donovan in amongst it all.
Very good melody and very gentle vocal!
It is so nice the chord progressions of A part which start with Dominant (G7) instead of Tonic (C) and go to Dominant of A minor (E7) - Am - F.
And Harmonica is very pleasant.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best Regards.

Shigeki Adachi


Hi Shigeki,

Thank you for listening, I`m happy you liked this song... your way of picking out the chord progression so exactly is impressive.

Robert

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Originally Posted By: Noel96
Robert,

I was mesmerised by the backing that you've assembled and arranged for this creation. I thought it was ideal. Lots of imaginative lyrics, metaphors and imagery! I found myself wondering what the book must have been like to read.

Thanks for posting. It's always enjoyable to hear where your songwriter's pen takes us.

All the best,
Noel


Noel,
I have to give most of the credit to BiaB for the arrangement... not much to change with the new styles. The book (and especially the boy`s relationship with the slightly touched religious man) is very good.
Thanks for continuing to listen to my songs!

Robert

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