I'm not much into commenting lately. I never know when people are posting to get digital high fives verses looking to improve. That can be dangerous territory when commenting. wink That being said, you would surely get an enthusiastic high five from me. It's well deserved.

As far as critique/advice, that's where I will step back. I do tend to side with Charlie on this though. You've got the ingredients for the recipe, but need to tweak the recipe just a bit. It's a good recipe, don't get me wrong here.

That hook at the chorus is killer and sung really well. The over all feel is the type of mood I'm really drawn to in a song. I never know why, but I know I really like it. Well done!

Keep 'em coming. I'm more excited than you can imagine to start hearing more ventures into this style/genre.

BTW, what thread prompted you to take things in this direction?

In case it got lost in my babbling, I like your song! smile

Chad (Hope that makes it easier)

TEMPO TANTRUM: What a lead singer has when they can't stay in time.