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HearToLearn #531965 04/07/19 11:18 PM
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HTL,

Thanks very much - I appreciate the kind words.

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Thanks very much!

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Excellent song Robert, love the way it is written, your vocals are dead on for the style here. Great work!!! Cliff

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Alan,

That is very kind of you. I really appreciate your support - thank you!

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Herb,

Thanks very much!

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Originally Posted By: tommyad
Nicely presented. The production is impeccable, Tom


Impeccable. That's the word I was looking for!

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Had to listen again, this song drew me back. Hypnotic.


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Catherine,

I appreciate that - thank you!

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DJ,

That is very appreciated - thanks so much!

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TuneMonger,

Thanks so much - I appreciate the listen and kind words.

Bob

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Hey, I'm listening again today. I think this is my favorite tune I've heard here on the PG forum that isn't by a guy named Floyd. Today it reminded me of Thomas Rapp and Pearls before Swine, you gotta be old and quirky to know that group. Thanks again.


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Cliff,

Thanks so much!

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Thank you - much appreciated!

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Hi Bob,

This is great.

I really love the rhyme schemes that you've used with the lyrics where the first two verses follow the asymmetric ABBXA and the final verse uses the more symmetric ABXBA. As I see it, this is really clever control of the lyric movement and a perfect match for the mystery of vampires.

As I'm sitting here thinking about it, what makes the rhyme scheme work so very effectively for me is...

1. the perfect rhyme on the first last lines in all verses

2. the odd number of phrases/lines with the asymmetric rhyme schemes really boosts the lyrics' emotional content

3. the third verse's symmetric rhyme scheme with the added tag gives a nicely balanced sense of completion and finality

You've used rhyme to drive this bus on a wonderful ride!

All the best,
Noel


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Bob,

As Peter said, a moody elegant and atmospheric write!
The combination of 2914: Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Folky16thsBrent Ev16 085 and 4 beat bass drum is very effective.
Your vocal perfect fits this tune.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

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TuneMonger,

Thanks again!

Bob

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TuneMonger,

Thanks so much! I am so glad you are enjoying this one.

Bob

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Noel,

Thank you - that was a very generous review... Much appreciated.

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Shigeki,

Thanks so much!

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Listened to this the other day. Thought I had left a note. Just loved the song. The lyrics were very cool and an excellent vocal. Guitar was a nice add. Well done


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