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Robert,
I look forward to anything you write... As usual, this is great - has your writing and vocal stamp on it.
I'm a fan!
Bob
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Robert,
Pretty song . . . lovely vocal and poetic lyrics. Great touch on the “girls and boys / red kit joy”—sweet harmonies. Good one!
Best regards,
Deej
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Hi Robert A bit late catching up on this one, but just thought I'd say how much I like the lyrics. Poetic and evocative. Really nice work. Regards, Leon
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Interesting combination of mandolin and string quartet but it works really well. And together with your flowing voice creates a warm atmosphere. The lyrics create another level of a dreamy scene, "nature takes revenge deer eat from her purse" - enjoyable poetry. The chord progression is a mysterious adventure I want to immerse myself in. Stunningly beautiful, I just don't have words to describe how much I like this...
Janne
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Hi, Robert !
This was so beautiful - I think it is the best I´ve heard from you and is definitely my new Robfav from now on !
Cheers Dani
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Janice immediately commented on how much she liked the imagery. We have not had deer eat from a purse but here it's not hard to imagine as they just stand in our trails and stare at us.
There is a very nice and engaging Beatlesque feel to the arrangement and your vocals.
And as I type Janice said, "now I want to go fly a kite!" Now that's a reaction a good lyric should cause.
Well done all the way around.
J&B
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Bob,Deej,Leon,Janne,Dani,J&B: I appreciate your listens and very positive comments. Thank you!
Robert
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Super song. I love the backing tracks you have here. Your vocal is strong and the harmonies were excellent.
You should be very proud of this.
Have you ever noticed there are no lines to a bathroom at a water park?
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Great idea and execution, Robert. Man, you have excellent taste. Great choice in instruments. You have a way of writing lyrics that gives a wonderful vision of the story. Very dynamic song, and I love the vocal.
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Cool song Robert!!! Really love the way the music took off (like a kite) at the point the title comes in.......felt kind of John Lennon!! Really creative, pretty song!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks for those listens and nice comments Mario, Marty & Greg!
Robert
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A really beautiful song Robert.
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I always tell you that your lyrics really stand out for me. You take different images and put them together into a cohesive picture...and you are concise with your words--you don't go overboard and try to fit to many words into the verse.
Musically, this has beautiful instrumentation. One part of the song that I find particularly appealing is where you are singing "girls and boys/red kite joy." I just love the blending of the voices and the feel of that section.
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Thanks David! Ezekiel`s Storm: I`m still learning to pare down lyrics to the essentials- glad you found this one succeeded.I appreciate your positive comments.
Robert
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Robert,
The nostalgic scene of childhood will come to me naturally. It's a song full of tenderness. Your vocal perfectly fits this. Your selection of RealTracks is very nice. I heard your characteristic chord progression again this time. Enjoyed my listen a lot.
Best regards.
Shigeki Adachi
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Sure, I still like your songs Jim! Seriously though, Hans- call me whatever just not my (secret) middle name.
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Quite poetic. Love the message. Well done.
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Shigeki- thank you for the nice review! CaptainMoto- glad you liked this!
Robert
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