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Hi Deej56,

Nice declaration of love through your lyrics. It's soft and the cello brings more. Your voice transcribes your feelings. Well done.

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Very nice Deej! Reminiscent of some early Beatles! Touching song with an excellent vocal (you always deliver in that department)! I heard nothing that seemed out of place to me in this! Great song! Thanks, T




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Deej,
Nice romantic tune. Straight out, it reminded me of Ray Peterson "Tell Laura I Love Her". Vocal intonations? Subject? Production?
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Solid write! Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

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Great intro that catches the interest immediately.
The start of the verse reminds me Elvis song Always On My Mind.
Beautiful chording reflects the emotions in the lyrics nicely. Interesting story, sad verses and chorus end in the positive "I'm all right now" feeling, although there's some uncertainty about it, because "You" is not personalized in any way and the word "somehow" at the end leaves the listener wondering.
Very enjoyable vocals once again. Very good band, the violin is an excellent choice and the guitar solo blends in nicely.

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Deej, it is always a joy to hear your vocals. This time it is even more so because of the great write. The excellent chord progression and melody certainly echoes the Beatles and that is a fantastic place to land. Tom

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You always give us a great vocal, but this had everything - melody, lyrics and vocal - a great song needs. One of your very best for sure.


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Hi Deej ...

I'm always drawn to your vocals. You have a uniquely fabulous vocal talent - I love listening to you sing! But this song has it all. As previously mentioned, simple approach, excellent lyric, fabulous vocal, splendid arrangement and a great band.

I've been a professional guitarist for many, many years - got paid way too much (but that's OK!) for my talent. Don't sell yourself short ... your acoustic lead sounded just fine. - you even git in that 5th (augmented) note!

Totally loved it! Best to you. Take care ...

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Good one, Deej. Hope this kick starts the year for you.


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Wonderful write!
Great lyrics and a melody like sweet syrup dripping down a well prepared dessert that compliments the meal.

As always love your vocals.

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Emotional lyrics carry this song with feeling.

A quality production. The cello adds the perfect backing.


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Derochette, Torrey, Misha, Janne, Tommy, TuneMonger, Alan, Ed, Moto and VideoTrack:

Thanks all for the listens and kind words. I was glad to have the chance to do a BIAB version and more so that it seems to have turned out well. My very best regards and wishes to you all!

Alan: As for the guitar solo, yeah, I think it came out alright—just don’t ask me how many takes it took me to do it, LOL! And to show my musical ignorance, I have no idea what a 5th (augmented) not is. But glad it I hit it!

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Deej,

Very beautiful song!
Super vocal.
It reminded me of The Beatles' "Till There Was You" a little bit.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

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