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Page two was a step too far away so I took the liberty of throwing up a new thread for the master of the as yet untitled song.
Thanks for all the excellent suggestions and commentary.
Thanks to Floyd Jane for sharpening the tynes.

The song was mastered, as is usual for me, by Fran Ashcroft of HappyBeat studios.

Untitled

Comments/commentaries on the song writing, performance, mix and master are welcome and will be stored for the next one.

Video? Yes, in a couple of days as I didn't expect to finish this one at all so am unprepared.

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This sounds great.

The mix is SO well blended. One BIG sound that WORKS.

Sounds like a classic PopPunk song. A hit.

Top-notch. From every angle.

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Sounds great, Ray. This one gets played LOUD. I'm especially digging that crunchy guitar sound, it's like a bowl of sugary breakfast cereal for my ears.

PS – Thank you for the feedback <= This is a joke

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Hi Ray
Cool song
Cool tempo
I like it very much
Great work Ray
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Yes, this one really sounds great!

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Sounds as good as most all the "Punk Rock" I've listened to, which is very little... I do like the energy, and most of the mix, but I'm still not catching all of the lyric... Vox sounds in tune, but for me, could be more out-front... but then, I'm just not a fan of the genre, so... what do I know..?


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I thought this was great... I don't think it's ugly enough to be called punk. A good mix. Vocals, instruments, levels all sound good to me. The master sounds smooth and polished... Another reason I can't call it punk.

Nice Job!

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Originally Posted By: Achordocaster
I don't think it's ugly enough to be called punk. The master sounds smooth and polished... Another reason I can't call it punk.
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Greg,
Thanks and, regarding genre, I agree 100%.
Having enjoyed being a late teen when UK punk broke through and broke down I have a solid enough memory and record collection of what it was and wasn't. This thing is closer to pop rock I think though it has the saving grace of an inept lead guitar part!


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Originally Posted By: rayc
This thing is closer to pop rock I think though it has the saving grace of an inept lead guitar part!

grin;-) the lead guitar is my favorite part... the bass and guitars are excellent.
After another listen, I find the song may be growing on me... not unlike some other things.

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Man, I had my volume level set for a mix I'm working and had the 'phones on, just about blew the top of my head off when this started to play eek

This sounds great to me, Ray, love the groove. Bass and guitars right on the money, and I think your vocals works well here too.


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Very well done, Ray. Vocal is perfect out front. Excellent bass!! The whole band screams beautifully. Mix is so well-polished. Sounds like that feedback sustain is still going...


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Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Man, I had my volume level set for a mix I'm working and had the 'phones on, just about blew the top of my head off when this started to play eek
This sounds great to me, Ray, love the groove. Bass and guitars right on the money, and I think your vocals works well here too.

Sorry about that,
I always have masters down for CD & sometimes I forget to adjust.


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Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Very well done, Ray. Vocal is perfect out front. Excellent bass!! The whole band screams beautifully. Mix is so well-polished. Sounds like that feedback sustain is still going...


One guitar left & one right with the lead feeding back a bit behind everything. Mind you the rhythm guitar parts were tracked with a 57 & an e609 which were blended so it gives a bigger sound with less need for EQ.
I was dubious about the Knockoffner but it seems to have done the job.

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Still making a noise, still playing those toys. Long may you, Ray. Nice big sound, love the ending.
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"Still making a noise, still playing those toys" what a great line. Most of us here can relate to it!

Super mix

Great vocal

Fantastic banding tracks

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Fun and catchy. It took me back. Not harsh enough for punk, but echoes of it. New Wave perhaps, but British. Buzzcocks on a mellow day? Post punk? Stranglers? Anyway, got my vote.

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As others said, nice big wall of sound.

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Ray,
this is good. Now that I heard the tune for at least 1/2 a dozen times, I am convinced, it is good. Good not in the sense that it is "good for your level" but actually a good contribution to the genre. Don't listen to "too soft for punk" comments. Those are simply not true smile
Mastering added a nice coat of luster and clarity. Definitely one of your top tunes. Thank you for sharing.

P.S. Extra... Katya loved it. She doubles my thoughts. Also, she said lyrics are (sad, but) great and excellent harmonies.

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Originally Posted By: rayc

Awright... Love the Video Production... I get it now... maybe.
Way cool.


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