David,

A pleasant BAND, a nice musical bed for the synth voice.
Mix sounds good (the Bass is slightly boom-y in earbuds).

The vocals are pleasant, too.
They sometime come across as "too perfect" (too exact?). Part of that impression comes from the movement and cadence of the melody (which made my ear "follow" the voice instead of simply "listening" to it - if that makes sense)

Nice re-do.

fj