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"I dreamed I would find you upon this old stone wall
And we would sit together for hours I recall
Come on down but the wall is too high
I’ll help you down but you just have to try
And over on the dirt road we will walk
I could listen for hours when you talk"
Wow ...
Great lyric and your vocal is top bar -- emotive and fitting so well in the mix.
Love the band mashup that is very reminiscent of Lou Reed, a good thing.
We get that the coffee house ship has sailed but, man, we can hear you and the Waifs at the City Winery!
Most enjoyable!
J&B
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Hi, Bob. Cool sound. As usual, poetic and evocative write. The simple chorus works great for me! Love it. 
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Such colour in the lyric, Bob.
Nicely arranged.
Vic
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Hans,
That's very kind. Thanks.
Bob
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Misha,
Thanks - much appreciated.
Bob
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Nice tune Bob!!! You've got a style that is just so listenable.....rolls along in an incredibly pleasant way!!! Enjoyed a lot!! Take care. Greg
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David,
Thanks - I appreciate that.
Bob
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Bob,
Your songs always shine.
As I said on Soundcloud, I absolutely love how you can create such wonderful impressionistic imagery using words. That's such a great skill.
Music writing and presenting at it's best.
--Noel
MY SONGS...Audiophile BIAB 2024
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Great lyrics, and use of Real Tracks, sounds full, and pro level backing tracks.
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Janne,
Thanks for the kind comments. Much appreciated.
Bob
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WaoBand,
Thanks very much.
Bob
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Janice & Bud,
Thanks so much. You guys are too kind!
Bob
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Hi Bob, I just listened to your song, here's my feedback. Technical feedback: - Interesting combination of Realtracks. I didn't expect these synthesizers to go with the guitars, but they certainly do. Good job
- Good production, wide and open mix
Artistic feedback: - Interesting and a bit mystic lyrics. I like that a lot
- The choice of instruments and the way you arranged them support the song perfectly. Well done!
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David,
Thanks - I appreciate the listen and kind words.
Bob
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Greg,
I appreciate that - thanks.
Bob
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Noel,
I appreciate that - thank you.
Bob
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Reading your list, I thought, "Interesting combination." They work together nicely, yet still retain your folk feel.
The sun was sinking low
Big Indian Park
Silver tangled hair
Lighting up the dark
Great opening lines!
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