Previous Thread
Index
Next Thread
Print Thread
Go To
Page 1 of 3 1 2 3
#786509 12/04/23 12:36 PM
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,226
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,226
A new one.

The kind of piano song that I'm hoping will be well represented in BIAB 2024.

For this one, I played piano and strings.
I "programmed" (hand input) the bass.

And the BIAB stuff...
RealTracks in style: 2667:Pedal Steel, Background DreamySingleNote Ev 075
RealTracks in song: 3441:Guitar, Electric, Soloist BritPsycRockMarch Ev 110
RealTracks in song: 1856 Cello, Background PopCountry Ev 085

I've seen some discussion (in Off Topics, I think) that "complained" about getting good solos.
I've always been very happy with the solos I'm able to get from BIAB (find pieces that work and build it).
This one, in particular, I COULD NOT be happier with. It's perfect, I think...
And the steel and cello are perfect compliments for a piano track.

I Love BIAB. Period.



Okay....so...

IT'S YOUR MOVE


what do i do?
i've run out of words
nothing i can say
can undo the hurt
some lessons
only heartbreak can teach
some sins run deeper
than forgiveness can reach
but i'm reaching
   
   it all hangs in the balance
   can we still find the groove
   i'll die without you
   but it's your move
   i can barely breathe
   my heart's stopped, too
   will you fall in or out, girl
   it's your move
   it's your move

i hit a rough patch
i wasn't thinking straight
i came to my senses
was it too late
i saw the damage
i know that's on me
i pray with all my being
it's not too late
i'm reaching
   
   it all hangs in the balance
   can we still find the groove
   i'll die without you
   but it's your move
   i can barely breathe
   my heart's stopped, too
   will you fall in or out, girl
   it's your move
   it's your move



And, again...It's Your Move.

fj

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 7,539
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 7,539
Floyd,

Heartbreakingly beautiful... Exquisite lyrics and vocal.

Love the piano. You play so well. Yes, that solo is perfect, as is the pro-mix. All the tracks work.

You are the master!

Bob

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,199
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,199
Yeah this sounds really good Floyd.

Love that piano.

Great job on everything!

User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2012
Posts: 8,026
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2012
Posts: 8,026
Hi Floyd,

That first verse is just killer - every word, every line.

Piano sounds terrific - marries nicely with the RTs.

Powerful vocal with the perfect amount of poignancy to convey the despair of the lyrical subject. This shines in every way!

I fully agree with you about getting wonderful lead riffs from just about all the lead (and sometimes the "background)" RTs for the needed riffs. And, as you know, I write in numerous genres. I've never been left wanting as long as I did due diligence in sorting out the RTs and "molding' them as needed.

I've twice been a teacher - I'd grade this an A+. Really nice.

Alan


BIAB 2024 Ultra Plus-all StylePaks*Win11*32GB DDR5*Rhyzen 9745x*AT 2035 Mic*Peavey Nashville 112 Amp*Ibanez ART120* Acoustic/Electric/Washburn D200S Acoustic*Stromberg Monterey Jazz Guitar

Loops: https://aldavidmusic.wixsite.com/bestmusicloops

User Showcase
Joined: Nov 2008
Posts: 2,034
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Nov 2008
Posts: 2,034
Floyd, breathtakingly beautiful. Just no words to convey the power of this tune for me. I agree that this soloist sounds like he's playing perfectly to your tune. And just between us, if I could play piano like this I'd never use piano RealTracks. Bravo!


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2004
Posts: 1,727
Expert
Offline
Expert
Joined: Aug 2004
Posts: 1,727
Hi Floyd,

Excellent song and also good piano playing and vocals.

I must admit I was waiting for the bass and drums to come in but that's just me.

Also I would have liked the guitar solo at double the volume and half the reverb to match the vocals volume.

Excellent - would love to hear a remix.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com
rsdean #786550 12/04/23 04:38 PM
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 22,230
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 22,230
Originally Posted by rsdean
Floyd,

Heartbreakingly beautiful... Exquisite lyrics and vocal.

Love the piano. You play so well. Yes, that solo is perfect, as is the pro-mix. All the tracks work.

You are the master!

Bob

I completely agree with Bob and I couldn't have said it any better.

Yes, you are the master.

Loved it


Today I bought a doughnut without the sprinkles. Diets are hard!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 7,030
G
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
G
Joined: Dec 2013
Posts: 7,030
STUNNINGLY BEAUTIFUL!!!! Just the right amount of arrangement!! This brings the intensity of emotion that few songs ever can!!! Wonderful lyric!!! I particularly love...

only heartbreak can teach
some sins run deeper
than forgiveness can reach
but I'm reaching

PERFECT!!!

One of your best vocals ever!!!
Pretty much flawless from my point of view my friend!!!!

Take care. Greg

User Showcase
Joined: May 2015
Posts: 2,931
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2015
Posts: 2,931
floyd,

It's a very moving song. Beautiful!
Great vocals.
It's a wonderful piece with a slow tempo, piano and vocals, and the classic ballad style.
Hand input is very effective for songs like this.
Enjoyed my listen a lot.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi

User Showcase
Joined: Sep 2010
Posts: 7,295
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Sep 2010
Posts: 7,295
Whew! I gave it a listen in my headphones, and wondered what's this weird resonance I'm hearing? I couldn't figure it out, and no one else mentioned it, so I figured I'd just give the song a listen tomorrow.

Finally, my son walked by, pointed, and said "Dad, you've got the speakers on." blush

All right, with that out of the way...

Lovely. Intimate and close. Piano is dead simple, just like you've been asking for on that other thread. Cello and guitar sound great - the distortion on the guitar adds a nice edge to an otherwise sweet arrangement of sounds. When the strings come in, it widens the sound wonderfully.

Vocal is fantastic, bringing life to the grief-filled lament.

Once again, a master class on showing how it's done! laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?
User Showcase
Joined: May 2019
Posts: 3,999
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2019
Posts: 3,999
Ditto on the period! This is wonderfully crafted from the songwriting to the arrangement, band selection (the piano player is my favorite), and the presentation. Hey, wait... I got all the way through the first time, and realized I never heard the bass. Now that's odd for me...

Oh, it's bowing with the strings. What an extraordinary, beautiful song, Floyd. You have such a huge range of goodness.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@babumusic51
SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/marty-straub
Band in a Box, Reaper, Cakewalk, Ozone 11
User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2016
Posts: 2,238
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Feb 2016
Posts: 2,238
Floyd...this is certainly a track to be proud of...the piano is the key...the simple metering is the perfect palate for a tender ballad and with the strings (exquisite) and cello...man that melts a heart...the song is quintessential floyd jane! so well written and produced...stylistically one of my favorites of yours...your musicianship captured me on this one for sure! so good!


www.soundclick.com/firesong
BiaB 2024, Steinberg Cubase Pro 13, Wavelab 11.2, SpetraLayers Pro 10, Audacity, Steinberg UR44 Interface, Yamaha Genos, Roland FP60 and FP10, Windows 10

You are who you are because you do what you do because of what you believe.
User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2020
Posts: 599
Journeyman
Offline
Journeyman
Joined: Jun 2020
Posts: 599
probably a dated phrase but 'you killed it', Floyd (this is a very good compliment for all you youngin's)! Love the solo BIAB created. It was a nice compliment as you noted to the piano (great job by the way). I also like the placement of the hook in the chorus.

Dewey

rsdean #787011 12/06/23 06:40 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,226
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,226
Originally Posted by rsdean
Floyd,

Heartbreakingly beautiful... Exquisite lyrics and vocal.

Love the piano. You play so well. Yes, that solo is perfect, as is the pro-mix. All the tracks work.

You are the master!

Bob

Bob - thanks for the very nice comments. And I appreciate the mention of the piano (since I really just learned to play this past year)....

User Showcase
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,219
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,219
FJ, That may be one of your most expressive emotive vocals. The writing is superb. The piano is the perfect padded bed for the supporting fills and solo. Fantastic use of real tracks. I found this extremely moving. My eyes were moist by the end, Tom

User Showcase
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,276
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2018
Posts: 2,276
"some lessons
only heartbreak can teach
some sins run deeper
than forgiveness can reach
but i'm reaching"

SUPERB.

User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2022
Posts: 2,031
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Jul 2022
Posts: 2,031
I remember your forum post where you asked for some specific piano RealTracks ... and instead of waiting, you simply upped your piano skills and played them yourself.
Good decision, I like them a lot.
Your song is pretty pure with a sparse arrangement and a voice full of emotion.
Excellent choice.
This song would be the perfect encore for a live performance, just you and the piano and the light of 1000 lighters cell phones.


Making bits and bytes sound good...

Goldmania Bella - A One-Man Girlband with no fans
Listen on Spotify
Watch on YouTube
User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2016
Posts: 6,684
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Apr 2016
Posts: 6,684
Your piano part is lovely and fits wonderfully - particularly as the left hand isn't heavy creating a lopsided bass feel.
I like everything about this. It moves from sparse to lushness with just a couple of added elements and then back to bare bones, bare emotions that bear the weight.


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2002
Posts: 1,077
F
Expert
Offline
Expert
F
Joined: Feb 2002
Posts: 1,077
Floyd,
One of your best writes. The lyrics are perfect. Goes without saying your arrangement, mix, and vocal are wonderful.


Fred Grittner
2020 iMac, Sonoma, Logic Pro
https://52tracksblog.com
https://fredgrittner.bandcamp.com
Al-David #787352 12/07/23 05:34 AM
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,226
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,226
Originally Posted by David Snyder
Yeah this sounds really good Floyd.

Love that piano.

Great job on everything!

smile smile smile


Originally Posted by Al-David
Hi Floyd,

That first verse is just killer - every word, every line.

Piano sounds terrific - marries nicely with the RTs.

Powerful vocal with the perfect amount of poignancy to convey the despair of the lyrical subject. This shines in every way!

I fully agree with you about getting wonderful lead riffs from just about all the lead (and sometimes the "background)" RTs for the needed riffs. And, as you know, I write in numerous genres. I've never been left wanting as long as I did due diligence in sorting out the RTs and "molding' them as needed.

I've twice been a teacher - I'd grade this an A+. Really nice.

Alan

Much appreciated, Alan...

Previous Thread
Next Thread
Go To
Page 1 of 3 1 2 3

Link Copied to Clipboard
ChatPG

Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.

ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.

PG Music News
Update your Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows® Today!

If you’ve already purchased Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®, great news—a new update is now available! This update introduces a handy new feature: a vertical cursor in the Tracks window that shows the current location across all tracks, and more.

Discover everything included in this free update and download it now at https://www.pgmusic.com/support_windowsupdates.htm#1124

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Boot Camp: The AI Lyrics Generator

With Band-in-a-Box 2025® for Windows®, we've introduced an exciting new feature: the AI Lyrics Generator! In this video, Tobin guides you step-by-step on how to make the most of this new tool.

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Boot Camp: The AI Lyrics Generator video.

Check out the forum post for more information.

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Using VST3 Plugins

Band-in-a-Box 2025® for Windows® now includes support for VST3 plugins, bringing even more creative possibilities to your music production. Join Simon as he guides you through the process in this easy-to-follow demonstration!

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Using VST3 Plugins

Join the conversation on our forum.

Video: Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows: Using The BB Stem Splitter!

In this video, Tobin provides a crash course on using the new BB Stem Splitter feature included in Band-in-a-Box 2025® for Windows®. During this process he also uses the Audio Chord Wizard (ACW) and the new Equalize Tempo feature.

Video: Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows®: Using the BB Stem Splitter

Check out the forum post for some optional Tips & Tricks!

Congrats to Misha (Rustyspoon)…downloaded/installed a full Audiophile 2025!

Breaking News!

We’re thrilled to announce that Rustyspoon has made PG history as the very first person to successfully complete the download and install of the full Band-in-a-Box 2025 Windows Audiophile Edition (with FLAC files)—a whopping 610GB of data!

A big shoutout to Rustyspoon for stepping up to be our test "elf!"

Thank you for your support, Rustyspoon!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows Videos

With the launch of Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows, we're adding new videos to our YouTube channel. We'll also share them here once they are published so you can easily find all the Band-in-a-Box® 2025 and new Add-on videos in one place!

Whether it's a summary of the new features, demonstrations of the 202 new RealTracks, new XPro Styles PAK 8, or Xtra Styles PAKs 18, information on the 2025 49-PAK, or detailed tutorials for other Band-in-a-Box® 2025 features, we have you covered!

Reference this forum post for One-Stop Shopping of our Band-in-a-Box® 2025 Videos - we will be updating this post as more videos are added!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows is Here!

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Windows is here, packed with major new features and an incredible collection of available new content! This includes 202 RealTracks (in Sets 449-467), plus 20 bonus Unreleased RealTracks in the 2025 49-PAK. There are new RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, “Songs with Vocals” Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 4, two new sets of “RealDrums Stems,” XPro Styles PAK 8, Xtra Styles PAK 19, and more!

Special Offers
Upgrade to Band-in-a-Box® 2025 with savings of up to 50% on most upgrade packages during our special—available until December 31, 2024! Visit our Band-in-a-Box® packages page for all the purchase options available.

2025 Free Bonus PAK & 49-PAK Add-ons
We've packed our Free Bonus PAK & 49-PAK
with some incredible Add-ons! The Free Bonus PAK is automatically included with most Band-in-a-Box® for Windows 2025 packages, but for even more Add-ons (including 20 Unreleased RealTracks!) upgrade to the 2025 49-PAK for only $49. You can see the full lists of items in each package, and listen to demos here.

If you have any questions, feel free to connect with us directly—we’re here to help!

Forum Statistics
Forums66
Topics83,963
Posts763,819
Members39,246
Most Online25,754
Jan 24th, 2025
Newest Members
bowak, ameliataylor, richardmolle914, Cat-Astro, Lou G.
39,246 Registered Users
Top Posters(30 Days)
MarioD 195
musocity 193
jpettit 145
Jim Fogle 104
rsdean 99
Noel96 98
Today's Birthdays
BillBuchanan, Bob Z
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5