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Hi Elliott, My one and only song with whistling. Thanks for listening
Like your song - "DREAM We can change the World"- nice modern crisp mix.
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Hi Floyd,
Good or bad I didn't use BiaB for this song. Just me. Thanks for listening.
I was very impressed by your last song. Great tone on the acoustic guitar and vocals!
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Thank you. I appreciate the feedback
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gman...welcome to the forum...really nice introduction for us to listen to and get a feel of your style ...super vocal...others have commented on some bells and whistles (no pun intended) that might certainly polish an already fine song...this is a great place to learn and join a family of musicians/writers/singers/composers/producers that have found BiaB to be a great tool for their musical endeavors...so welcome and keep them coming
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Hi Gman,
Good to see a new face here.
I like your song, well written and performed.
Whistling during the intro was a nice touch, and very tasteful playing on the lead.
Never seen anyone post a bandcamp link here before, don't know much about that site actually. Do you make money whenever anyone streams your song?
Good song, enjoyed.
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Hi gman.
I echo Dave Cuny's words.
I like the simple lyric for this love song.
I think some of the gaps (not all) in the verses should be closed to emphasise the meaning of the line,
i.e. "Someone other than (delete gap here) the man I am today".
The chorus needs to be a little tighter and more dynamic. BIAB can also help there with its pushes and holds.
All in all a good start for you. Just needs a little work.
Vic
Last edited by vicarn; 05/02/24 05:30 AM.
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Hi, Bandcamp is just another site to post your song on. You can sell your music there and they will collect and give you 85%. I have never sold anything, I just use it to share.
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Firesong, thanks for the welcome. Looking forward to the feedback of others. That is why I signup on the forum.
Cheers,
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I like the song, especially the chorus. You sing it very well. I love the laid-back feel of it all.
Welcome aboard. I'm looking forward to your next piece.
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