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So, this is an older song of mine, which I decided to re-do now that I have better tools. In the first verse I have nothing but classical guitar right and left and vocals. Then I slowly start lying in the other stuff, but keeping it all compact and subdued with very careful instrument choices. Hope you enjoy it. LOVE AT LAST
David Snyderhttps://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs4/love-at-lastV1 I hope you’ll always know that dreams can last forever Cause I've been waiting all my life for us to be together You make me sing Amazing Grace And you let me know that God Is in this place And heaven has finally made its case and heaven has finally made its case CH And love, at last I see your face And love, at last I see your face And love, at last I see your face Your face V2 So I hope you'll always know that I will feel this way forever Cause I have seen the other world and I know your world is better You make me sing Amazing Grace And you let me know that God Is in this place And heaven I have felt your soft embrace And heaven I have felt your soft embrace CH And love, at last I see your face And love, at last I see your face And love, at last I see your face Your face All music and lyrics copyright David Snyder, 2001 David Snyder: Vocals, Classical Guitars, Acoustic Guitars, Additional Instrumentation, Mixing, Mastering and Production RealTracks in style: 3121:Bass, Acoustic, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 085 RealTracks in style: 2825:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm CountryPopMike12-key Ev 085 Bodhran, Celtic Air
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Intro sounds a little like Tears in Heaven.
Excellent job on the guitars, David! Great tone and technique. And this has to be one of the best vocals I've heard from you.
Nice arrangement, nice mix, but most importantly, great song.
Loved it!
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David,
Sounds great... Awesome vocal and arrangement. The mix on this is perfect - crisp and delicate.
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David, so many good things to say here, but LOVE your arrangement and the steady dynamic build. And the lingering guitar note at the end is very cool. Also, everything just SOUNDS great. Super song content and really strong vocals are what makes this work though. Very nice!! *Edit* Almost forgot to say your guitar work is really clean, musical and fun to listen to.
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What a wonderfully creative build, and I really like this song a lot, David. Yep. Listened 3 times now to be sure, but this is now my all-time favorite David Snyder song.
"And heaven has finally made its case"
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Hey Thanks Dave! Yeah I can't tell you how many times I listened to those side by side. ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif) The picking pattern (and notes) are different and the melody of the first part of verse 1 is completely different in both notes and phrasing, and once you get to Part II of the verse structure it is totally different, chords and everything. It also has 2 Pre-Choruses, kind of, or a 3-part structure in the verses anyway, And the CH is totally different. Glad you liked it man!!! And I will take a "sounds like Eric Clapton" any day! Thank you!
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Hey thanks Bob!
Appreciate that man!
Yeah I've been getting more and more into the classical guitar as a main instrument now, as I'm beginning to enjoy the piano more and more as well.
It's also beginning to occur to me that vocals are something that you have to spend a lot more time on then you would think!!
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David
Very nice build, and well sung and performed. One of your best.
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David, IMHO this is your best to date. Super vocal and lyrics Loved the intro and how you brought in the other instruments. You have raised the bar with this one.
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V1 says it all. Wonderful.
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David,
It's a wonderful write and terrific arrangement. In that regard, I like the build . . . starting simple and just adding along the way, which adds so much gravity to the tune as it moves on. From a production standpoint, I think the vocal is a bit too far out in front . . . I'd like it just a bit softer. Though that's an artistic preference . . . as always, go with what feels right to you.
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Hey Mario, Thanks a lot man!! Really appreciate that! I keep trying to up my game. But starting off so low, it is easy. ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
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First thought: Bob Dylan, but a better singing voice ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif) The song is superb. I agree with Deej ... the voice could be just a TAD less forward, softer, somehow. But who cares ... it's a superb song, superbly done. Every time I listen to a song of yours, I'm guaranteed originality and sincerity, at the very least. Then, of course, great expertise in how to actually craft a song - but that comes after, for me ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif) Anyway, long story short: BRAVO. WELL DONE. Hats off to you, sir.
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So Sweet David!!! Really great build of the arrangement!!! What are the strings you are using?........really impactful!!! BEAUTIFUL !!! Take care. Greg
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This is beautiful.
The opening is so raw and emotional. Nice build!
A worthwhile "trip back".
Do some more!
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Hey thanks DC. Appreciate that brother.
Yes I love playing that classical guitar for sure it's just a very enjoyable experience, and it kind of makes everything flow if you start writing a song while you're playing.
I'm kind of bonded with that old guitar! 🙂 Thanks for the listen my friend and all the kind words!
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Hey thanks Marty I really appreciate that!
It is so sweet of you to say!
Thanks for listening to it three times!! 😄
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The opening with your classical guitar is lovely. The build sounds good as does the entire mix.
Great SOULFUL vocal.
The sentimental fool Janice loves the lyric!
Man, what a redo … love it.
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Hey Peter thanks a lot! Appreciate the listen and I'm so glad you liked it.
Thanks again.
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Another "bigger than the universe" song by DS and what a delight it is. Classic. Not just because of the classical guitar, but the whole build-up is heavenly from the piano to the strings. And the lyrics keep in the subject all the time with a magnifying beauty. Very heartfelt vocals and the guitar playing is superb.
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Excellent production technique. Each instrument is added for a calculated effect in the mix. Majestic and satisfying build. Love the lyrics and melody.
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HI David,
What a gorgeous song and production. I love building layers in a song. And, you brought in the perfect ones at just the right time. So, what's not to like? Absolutely nothing. You outdid yourself. A new favorite of yours for me.
Well done!
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Hi David.
These lyrics really resonated with you and, coupled with such a excellent arrangement and performance, took me on a great journey. This was definitely worthy or a revisit and what a great outcome!
All the best, --Noel
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Hi, David. Sweet song, earnestly sung. Excellent build and arrangement. You're a man who clearly loves his nylon string! ![laugh laugh](/forums/images/graemlins/default/laugh.gif)
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Thanks Ray! Really glad you liked it man!
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This is a great song David. I liked the build, but honestly the words are terrific. It encapsilise how I feel about my wife, and becomes so relatable. Just great stuff!
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Hey DJ!
I appreciate that brother! Very kind of you to say!
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Hey James,
Thanks so much my friend. I am so happy you enjoyed it.
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Hey thanks Greg. Very kind of you to say.
Certainly appreciate the listen and the kind feedback my friend.
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Nicely done. It's good to have quality songs from the old days that you can pull into the here and now and they sound relevant.
I enjoyed it.
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David...first off the intro is is fantastic...the simplicity of the song is beautiful...the progression of the accompaniment is very tasteful and fitting all round...lyrically stellar...sometimes the older songs we've allowed to get lost in the closet are the gems we need to dig for...lovely!
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HI David,
Totally loved it! Almost any songs that builds in layers as the song progresses from one section to the next always has my ear. ech new layer comes in so gently it's hardly noticed at the moment. then you suddenly realize the strength of the work filling every square inch of the soundstage.
Great lyric Passionate vocal Super delivery Stunningly good mix.
Sweet!
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Thank FJ.
Glad you found it to your taste! Thanks for the listen!
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Dave - Beautiful song, lovely sentiment, your arrangement is wonderful, the way it builds from a soft guitar to a full orchestration. very nice
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Hey Janice and Bud,
Thanks so much for listening for the kind words! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and I hope you had a wonderful 4th of July.
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Hey thanks for the beautiful words Janne.
Means a lot!
Have a great week brother!!
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Very pretty song. Delicate and intimate. Guitar framing the vocal was perfect. Well done...
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Thanks Scott! That means a lot brother!
You have been killing it this year, I must say, my friend.
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Hey thanks Alan. I really appreciate your kind comments and the listen. I am really glad you liked it.
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Hey Noel,
Thanks so much for that. I appreciate the listen and your beautiful response. Thank you!
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Hey David Cuny, Thanks for the props! Yeah I do like my nylon man! ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
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