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Hi all,
For this ballad, Kevin (Synthesizer V) is singing.
There are no rhymes in lyrics because the essential is somewhere else...

https://soundcloud.com/christian-devienne/your-time-will-be-mine

Come with me
If you want
If you can
Your Time will be mine
In one month
In one year
In some years
In another life
In the sky you’ll find me
I will shine
Among stars
If you wanted to come next spring
It would be nice
And if you could give me this chance
I'd feel better

Even if
You don’t come
You’ll be there
In my foolish mind
Which escapes
In some dreams
That I live
By day and by night
From my sky I’ll find you
You will shine
Like a star
Lighting up the ambient darkness
By your sweet smile
Softening the ambient hardness
By your kindness

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Excellent, very impressed by your musical arrangement, melody, and lyrics. SynthV Kevin sounds very natural, and works well with this song. Simple yet complex. Very Nice !!!


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Thanks Elliott.
Your comment reassures me because English is not my usual language but I like to challenge myself.

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Chris, this is a really nice song, and I love your arrangement and mix. The vocals convey your lyrics quite well, though I find the too-perfect vibrato and absence of dynamics a distraction. Think you've gotten the use of English lyrics down, and you met this challenge quite well. Learning to listen to synth vocals has been a learning experience for me. Can't even imagine how much of a challenge it is to the programmers. Enjoyed your song!


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Thanks DC Ron,
I enjoyed your comment!

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Hi, Chris.

Pleasant song, but I've got no clue what it's about. smile

At 1:12, the pronunciation of "and" sounds like /oo n d/ rather than /ae n d/ or /eh n d/. I don't know why SynthesizerV insists on that pronunciation. frown

There are a few places where you've put a weak syllable on a strong beat, but other than that, it sounds pretty good!

Oh, and "World" really needs "the" in front of it.

I'm always happy to hear one of your songs. Nice work.


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Hi David,
Thanks for your good advices.
I've corrected the pronunciation of and.
I've changed the end of the lyrics.
Here's the sense of the song:
You can wait for somebody all your life and even after death.
Hoping to find her...
Dreams are made for this!

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