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Hi all, For this ballad, Kevin (Synthesizer V) is singing. There are no rhymes in lyrics because the essential is somewhere else... https://soundcloud.com/christian-devienne/your-time-will-be-mineCome with me If you want If you can Your Time will be mine In one month In one year In some years In another life In the sky you’ll find me I will shine Among stars If you wanted to come next spring It would be nice And if you could give me this chance I'd feel better Even if You don’t come You’ll be there In my foolish mind Which escapes In some dreams That I live By day and by night From my sky I’ll find you You will shine Like a star Lighting up the ambient darkness By your sweet smile Softening the ambient hardness By your kindness RT 1856 Cello RT 2336 Viola RT 2338 Violin EZkeys2 Piano
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Excellent, very impressed by your musical arrangement, melody, and lyrics. SynthV Kevin sounds very natural, and works well with this song. Simple yet complex. Very Nice !!!
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Thanks Elliott. Your comment reassures me because English is not my usual language but I like to challenge myself.
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Chris, this is a really nice song, and I love your arrangement and mix. The vocals convey your lyrics quite well, though I find the too-perfect vibrato and absence of dynamics a distraction. Think you've gotten the use of English lyrics down, and you met this challenge quite well. Learning to listen to synth vocals has been a learning experience for me. Can't even imagine how much of a challenge it is to the programmers. Enjoyed your song!
DC Ron BiaB Audiophile Presonus Studio One StudioCat DAW dual screen Presonus Faderport 16 Too many guitars (is that a thing?)
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Thanks DC Ron, I enjoyed your comment!
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Hi, Chris. Pleasant song, but I've got no clue what it's about. At 1:12, the pronunciation of "and" sounds like /oo n d/ rather than /ae n d/ or /eh n d/. I don't know why SynthesizerV insists on that pronunciation. There are a few places where you've put a weak syllable on a strong beat, but other than that, it sounds pretty good! Oh, and "World" really needs "the" in front of it. I'm always happy to hear one of your songs. Nice work.
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Hi David, Thanks for your good advices. I've corrected the pronunciation of and. I've changed the end of the lyrics. Here's the sense of the song: You can wait for somebody all your life and even after death. Hoping to find her... Dreams are made for this!
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